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Open Poetry #21

Morning Dew Of Originality

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-01 11:14 AM

In every second of life
There is a need to express
Displaying the brilliance to blossom
In the individuality of purpose

An offering of a bouquet so special
The uniqueness of personality shines
In the morning dew of originality
Sending perfumed aromas
Hypnotically into the heavens

Rainbow be my guide to the other side of fantasy
That dances on clouds of spiral influences
Reaching the heights of vivid imaginations
Soaring the universe in unlimited possibilities

So painters bring your breathless brush stokes
Writers start the words of a magic kingdom
Sculptors bring your hands of sensitivity
Musicians free the mind in spiritual highs

Let us all free ourselves of the bondage of despair
Flying free from the stench that upsets our stomachs
Unbind those strings of confining restrictions
That imprisons a person into a puppet of society
Limiting the boundaries of acceptable behavior

Let us take off our shoes
Walk into the chilly water of feelings
Revitalize the sensitivity of nature’s offering
Gaining the perspective to carry on
In the uniqueness of one’s self dreaming

Of an identity so special we mirror it
In the reflections of a freed spirit
Smiling in such triumph
That we let ourselves go

Go into the meditation of how special you are
And truly create a special piece of art
That will hold the temple of complete blessings

Thought: If we see life in one color we are blinded. In two colors we become too bland. But create in the full spectrum of hues of enlightenment the euphoria will erupt into the magnificence of your personality.

Email me if at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (06/300/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-07-01 12:24 PM

the imagery in this was awesome and very good.
my words of advise would be to choose
either a four line scheme of a 5 line
so that it will flow better,
because with both it gets confusing,
It was very good though
thanks for posting

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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