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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-01 10:00 AM

My voice
forlorn
in weeping clouds...

Your love
drifted
on tattered wings...

I close my eyes...

No more... no more...........

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-01 10:02 AM

An emotional pull in your words......Concise presentation! Good work!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-07-01 10:17 AM

This is evocative. Proof that you don't need to write three pages to get the feeling across.

Nan

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-07-01 10:51 AM

lots of feeling evoked and few words chosen but they were chosen well - I liked this lots - thanks for the great write - Paul

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

4 posted 2002-07-06 08:02 AM

My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem!

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2002-07-07 01:12 AM

Powerful!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-07 04:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, your words are alweays so smooth and exciting to read, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-07-07 04:10 PM

Lots of feeling here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

8 posted 2002-07-07 04:12 PM

Short , simply and very deep I like this alot keep posting

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-07-07 04:13 PM

Neeraja
I like.

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