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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-07-01 07:33 AM

Come with Me

Take my hand emote with me
Vision and fields of greenery
Walk where flowers choose to grow
Sing to them in words rondeau.

Lay upon the velvet stream
Color the clouds in hues of dream
Ghost them into fantasies gold
Let your mind see it unfold.

Be a rippling butterfly
Spread you wings the wind and fly
See the world from wonders blue
Hear the heart and beat of you.

Let the air caress your skin
Osmose the lures of gods within
Listen to life’s lullaby
The spirits of the souls espy.

It’s magic of the mind you seek
The goal of rainbows end mystique

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-07-01 08:04 AM

Take my hand emote with me
Vision and fields of greenery
Walk where flowers choose to grow
Sing to them in words rondeau.

Lay upon the velvet stream
Color the clouds in hues of dream
==================================

Be a rippling butterfly
Spread you wings the wind and fly
See the world from wonders blue
Hear the heart and beat of you.

Let the air caress your skin
Osmose the lures of gods within
Listen to life's lullaby
The spirits of the souls espy.

It's magic of the mind you seek
The goal of rainbows end mystique
=================================

*sigh*

YOU are the magic!!!
with the touch of your pen...you just colored our world with rainbow confetti and turned us all in to butterflies!!
How cool is that me Sy-babers...waaaay cool

And how cool are these lines of word play and vocab!!

Sing to them in words rondeau.

Hear the heart and beat of you.

Osmose the lures of gods within

The spirits of the souls espy.

only you could come up with rondeau
Delightful write Stinkylove...your words of rhyme and imagery wrap around me and take me to the Eden of your mind. I brought the tea...meet me under the willow tree...
we will "rondeau" for two

*L*

*winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-07-01 08:10 AM

JM,
My pleasure, I don't know why but I missed you. Must be the rainy weather. See you for tea, just you Randy and me.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-07-01 08:14 AM

Reverse osmosis to you to my friend....I just did all those things and I thank you for the encouragement....

"Vision and fields of greenery"

"Color the clouds in hues of dream"

"Spread you wings the wind and fly"

"Osmose the lures of gods within "

"The goal of rainbows end mystique"

Oh Sy's written some wonderful lines once again....

Through the eyes with all their sums
Look out brain here they come.

You're just a dang good poet old chap!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2002-07-01 09:08 AM

Dearest Seymour~
this is purest harmony, flowing ever so softly and caressing my mind as I read..excellent imagery within and pure joy to read, well penned.

~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-07-01 09:12 AM

Seymour darling boy Oh how utterly utterly perfect I love I love it utterly utterly. The feelings of joy and delight are exquisitely written darling heart, absolutely exquisite. As always you breathe over my soul with misty delight and I’m transformed, I become a winged delight of rainbow hue floating in air that sprinkled with lights luminescence.

Pure magic darling heart utterly utterly beautiful writing, you reach inside and the warmth radiates through my soul, thanks for the delightful glow. Good morning darling man. Have a fabulous day

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-01 09:20 AM

Sy, the rhythm and flow of this piece is just excellent!
Loved my morning read from you!
Enjoy the day...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-07-01 09:27 AM

ethome,
Kindness is always repaid, thank you.

Tracie,
Your comments are always a pleasure to read.

Marsha,
Your shower of flattery has swelled my head to sigh, Now I'll have to set it out to dry.

Enchantress,
Good morning sweet, I hope you had a good morning.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (07-01-2002 01:33 PM).]

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-07-01 09:44 AM

delightful - full of wonderful streams of thought and images - captivating write - thanks Paul

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-07-01 09:44 AM

Sy

I go there with your words, and it is the most enchanting place to be, your mind.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

10 posted 2002-07-01 10:05 AM

Sigh...what can I say more... I simply loved it!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-07-01 10:39 AM

"The goal of rainbows end mystique"

you know that part caught me, yes

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2002-07-01 10:50 AM

beautiful visions Sy
yes true romantics can fly
Hope

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2002-07-01 11:49 AM

Okeydoke. *G*

Whatcha mean you weren't talking to me? LOL

This is beautiful, Seymour... an absolute delight to read, a seed for dreams. *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2002-07-01 01:43 PM

Paul,
Thank you for the nice reply.

Martie,
Thank you dear.

Neeraja,
Glad you liked, thank you.

Passing Shadows,
I thank you my friend.

HopeS,
I know you can fly.

Suthern,
Plant some in your garden, you never know.

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

15 posted 2002-07-01 05:49 PM

Seymour hi there now this poem from you is magical, it really is beautiful, this is a gift of delight and beauty. I’m so happy I got to see this today, it’s been one of those days and this has elevated my spirits thank you. You are such an excellent writer with such a wide range. Really good writing, and thank you for the poetic lift

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-07-01 07:34 PM

Krissy,
My pleasure to brighten your day.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-07-03 09:04 PM

"Let the air caress your skin
                      Osmose the lures of gods within
                      Listen to life’s lullaby
                      The spirits of the souls espy.

                      It’s magic of the mind you seek
                      The goal of rainbows end mystique"

YAY!!! Oh Seymour, I just love this, sweet friend, may you always drift into your fantasies and find all the beautiful things your heart desires within! (big hugggssssss) This s gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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