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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Billow-spires blazing high Clouds of vapor rise I hear the Siren's voices sing My heart's in compromise A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-01-2002 09:03 AM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
wow when i read this i got a cool tingly feeling!! Careful with this one! ITS HOT!! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Uh oh ... Hope this isn't from the advice to go for it.  If it is, at least a great poem came out of it. If y' want, go back to Open 20 and find Siren song. That's my take on sirens. If not, write on!These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've been reading your work alot---and? you make me want an editor! HOW DO YOU DO THIS? HMMM....you keep the language simple and your poetry short, and it still has impact and layers of meaning... (studying you...) |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
E.S.- I don't know about hot, but I sure was feeling something when I wrote it. bsquirrel- you're too funny. by the way, I'm checking out that one "Siren's song"?? Serenity- I like to let my poems reflect my past relationships...short and dramatic. LOL Thank you for the compliments everyone!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
i can definitely FEEL THIS |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*waiting* to see what becomes of this... NOW you're in for it Kris...you got my serenity sis watching you...*monitor* thoughts around her...  *big grins* this was one of the most animated pieces of you I've seen yet!!!! Take care cutie and gaurd that heart!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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