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Open Poetry #21

Seaside Dining

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

0 posted 2002-07-01 12:32 PM

Flittering, these friends on high;
come to me when tides are nigh.
Reasoning, with watchful eye,
assure no morsel passes by.
Munch on treats of whole wheat rye,
melon, chips and last week's pie.
Watch me closely so as I
feed every wanting, begging cry.
When the winds of feasts subside,
thank me with your sweet gull sigh.
Whispy clouds that don earth's sky
welcome flight - a fair good-bye.
If only had I courage to try...
I'd give my spirit free rein to fly.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-07-01 12:45 PM

Nice topic! Personally I dislike the seemingly perfect aim of the Seagull

But I like your poem!!

Krishankins

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-01 12:45 PM

Yep! Gull's cries do that.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2002-07-01 10:57 AM

You mean they wait for your leftovers? LOL The gulls down here aren't so polite... they do their best to take lunch from you before you've had the first bite. LOL I like this very much. *S*

cherrypoptart
Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 109
state of wordthiness

4 posted 2002-07-01 01:15 PM

Nice read I enjoyed it.......I wouldn't try that last part without using an airplane. There might be a cry but it wouldn't be like the gulls......Just kidding.....you painted the seaside dining scene so very well in this.....I've been there many times and I can really relate!

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