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formerlyKellie
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since 2002-06-30
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0 posted 2002-06-30 09:45 PM


Sing to the lord almighty
Let him here your call
breathe his breath
make smiles a happy place
Sing a song dear lordy
sing a song for me

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2002-06-30 10:02 PM


Kellie: just a word of advice - if you want someone to critique your work you should perhaps place it in 'critical analysis' forum........keep writing, your talent is very unique - don't give up simply because no one comments on your work - think of it as your gift to others ciao bella Roniece
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2002-06-30 10:08 PM


Kelly, I just got here. Give me a break. From the sidebar it looks like you've just made 5 posts? Stay a week or so, read some other people's poetry and let them know what you think, they'll read yours.

Nan

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3 posted 2002-06-30 10:11 PM


Kellie~
Honey ... we are here for you~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

formerlyKellie
Junior Member
since 2002-06-30
Posts 10

4 posted 2002-06-30 10:13 PM


does anyone have aim? aka aol instant messanger or yahoo messanger

my sn's are
AIM: ameeraskittles
Yahoo: speggellyos

IM me if u want, i need to talk to some one

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