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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-06-30 02:15 AM



Clear as water, there is not enough
supplies countries needs in the rough
six hundred years plus,
its secret is distilled
never say its enough
against the strongly willed.

Interestingly its finances were stately
as it destroyed families unabatedly
created abuses
and social recluses
yet the state still approved its uses.

sparkling spring is just as clear
consumption continues amongs peers
its secret..diffused among strongly willed
never say enough of this distilled....




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-30-2002 09:22 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-30 02:53 AM


is this Vodka? if not it should be; very clever write Martin
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2002-06-30 09:22 AM


Yes it is...604 years old according to one web source..thanks to a Genoese merchant who exported it through Lithuania.


Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-30 12:15 PM



Riddle us some more....

ecrivan
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my own state
4 posted 2002-06-30 12:18 PM


pleasure..hiccup..hehe


cherrypoptart
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state of wordthiness
5 posted 2002-06-30 03:29 PM


Very good.
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