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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-06-29 05:41 PM



Beneath The Summer Moon
~*~
Beneath the summer moon
a piano plays a sultry tune
as enticing stars scatter droplets
of lovers lure
like a magnet drowning in resist
my iron will no longer exists
as two hearts softly caress
the exquisite sound
pounding
beneath the summer moon
~*~

BloomingRose


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-06-29 05:50 PM


Beautiful verse. ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-06-29 06:20 PM




(smiles) Oh Debra, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you paint, this is soooooo passionately gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) May this joy last forever to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-06-29 06:43 PM


Debra darling girl this is utterly utterly brilliant, such a wonderful poem from you written as only YOU know how. I felt this within as a soft and gentle as baby’s breath and as passionate as only fire can be. Wonderful writing, I love it utterly utterly

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-06-29 06:57 PM


Very lovely Deb.
~Hugs~

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-06-29 07:41 PM


Diamond~ Thank you very much.

Noah~ Hugs to you, as always!

Marsha~ Such kind words from a sweet person. Thank you much!

Enchant~  Thank you

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2002-07-17 08:10 AM


I can picture that moon up there, and the romance that goes with it!  Enjoyed this moonlit reverie, my friend!!  

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Toerag
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7 posted 2002-07-17 08:24 AM


Really nice job here gal...like your pic too....(do you make enough money to support both of us?)
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