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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
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0 posted 2002-06-29 12:40 PM


Minuets & Hours


Minuets & hours click by
on my watch breaking my
Heart i never thought could hurt so much
Somebody told me all that alll you told
Was lies I didnt believe it till
You made me cry.

Minuets & hours click by
on my watch i sit here & wonder
How could the boy I truly love could betry me
This much? I stare out the window
To see the rain fall my heart is leaking
Blood to the floor.

Minuets & hours click by
on my watch I hate you so damn much
I thought you were different from
All the rest I was wrong I was only your
Playtoy though I do miss you I dont
Want you back.

Minuets & hours click by
on my watch I try to smile
To get ride of this hursh aching pain
That stabs my feeings to a cold
Metal floor, thinking of other things
Only makes it worse.

Minuets & hours click by
on my watch I just realized you
Left me for skank whore what's
She got better than me? Huh? She aint
Got **** honey but enjoy you new love
Dont you dare come crawling back.

Minuets & hours click by
on my watch sitting here I not
Alone i found some one new
That cares alot about me.

©Ang
TIME: 5:00A.M.

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

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1 posted 2002-06-29 04:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sad but has a happy ending, sweet friend, I'm sorry you were treated that way before but I am so happy now you are cared for as you deserve so very much! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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