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Alan
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0 posted 2002-06-29 09:01 AM


In memories as light as angel whispers
She appears when ever I am down
Erasing my frown

With the sound of butterfly wings
We hover in time and space
I am lost to her heavenly grace

She takes me to that special place
One that no one else has ever known
Or could ever be shown

I feel the tenderness of our last kiss
The gentleness of our embrace
Forever keeps my heart in love sweet grace

© alan
06/29/02


© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-06-29 09:03 AM


As gentle and soft as a whisper Alan.
Lovely morning read.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-06-29 09:23 AM


Forever keeps my heart in love sweet grace
amen......thats the way it should be.
well written.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-29 09:30 AM



Alan!  This is lovely!  
So good to see you posting again!  
Welcome home!

Alan
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4 posted 2002-06-29 09:31 AM


Thank you Nancy

Gentle Spirit...you are right it should be this way. Glad you liked it

Alan
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5 posted 2002-06-29 09:34 AM


Sunshine...You sneaked in on me. I am glad to be back and happy to see you and the rest of my friends are still here.
Thank you for your sweet words
alan

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-29 09:44 AM


Alen,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Alan
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7 posted 2002-06-29 09:54 AM


Thank you Seymour
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-06-29 09:59 AM


Alan,
nicely done.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Neeraja
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9 posted 2002-06-29 02:18 PM


What a lovely poem!
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10 posted 2002-06-29 02:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Alan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this special feeling so so well and I wish for this love to forever carry you to the happiest place in your heart! (sigh) This is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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11 posted 2002-06-29 04:56 PM


A beautiful romantic and gentlr
ellie LeJeune
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12 posted 2002-06-29 05:19 PM


Alan; I can only give a sigh for the romantic and heartfelt love in this beautiful poem...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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