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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-06-29 07:55 AM



Seeds To Fruition

Each day awakens
Page white and new
Should I write for me
Shall I write for you

Do you read my lips
Or imagine my face
The emotional being
Emerging this space

Gypsy in the woods
Dancing tree to tree
Surrounds of ocean
Mermaid of the sea

At the early stages
What shall be seen
Am I young  or old
Or there inbetween

The seed to fruition
Takes time to grow
Words upon pages
Are like an embryo

Breaking out a shell
Imagining or reality
Reading of thoughts
Do you envisage me

Hope

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-06-29 08:45 AM


HopeS,
You write so well like a white dove with a velvet glove. Good morning.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2002-06-29 08:48 AM


The seed to fruition
Takes time to grow
Words upon pages
Are like an embryo
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The title caught my eye and then I found it was tied to the above wonderful verse and smiled at the intuitiveness of this piece.  Great writing from beginning to end.  Much enjoyed.

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-06-29 08:51 AM


Thanks Seymour for your sweet reply , this Aussie dove
hope's  to continue writing "heart verses of love "
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-06-29 08:56 AM


Thanks Mark , yes often there are words and verses scattered alike seeds that grow throughout the day , also from when I first began writing it as helped my confidence grow
Hope

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-06-29 09:23 AM


Hope,
I can see why this is loved, it is so soft and gentle and rests like rose petals upon the heart.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-06-29 09:26 AM


Hope, your words grow so softly upon these pages of blue.  I love the way your writing has grown, you are a very special
Hugs to you sweetie.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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7 posted 2002-06-29 03:28 PM




(smiles) Oh Hope, we are all sooooo proud of you, sweet friend, your wonderful writing just continues to grow and your loving heart and skills prove it in your poems! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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