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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Potpourri I tip toed through the tulips On the feet of fantasy And kissed the nectar from her lips In a dreamers pot potpourri I rode a magic carpets flight Through heavens view of gold and blue And there stood small beneath lace white My every wish I wished comes true. She led me through a garden scene Of sun and golden daffodil One of Eden’s velvet green Where waterfalls of stars did spill And there I did succumb to her Within my arms this gentle dove And all around the odor myrrh For I was very deep in love There is no sweeter sweet or wile Until I woke, with quite a smile |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour most beautiful mixture what more can I say this was a sweet scented loving medley Hope P.S I have a old poem titled " Heart Pot-pourri" in files , I shall have to drag it out sometime and post it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh pull the covers up and go back, go back to this lovely dream! Never mind, the tea is ready...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, I would love to see it, thank you dear. Sunshine, I am answering in my sleep.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah a sigh of a read from dear Sy this morning.. I'm ever ao lucky to read you on the weekend as well! Wonderful write! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, Good weekend sweet lady. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I could smell it from here. Well done, enjoyed the read. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, a weekend begun with you is always a good weekend, so when they ask me "dijyaaveagoodweekend" I can honestly answer yes, no matter what else happens. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of writing this is darling boy it’s exquisite You’ve written absolute perfection here, and I love it love it love it utterly love it Always your writing flows over my soul like honeyed wine. Never do you fail to enchant and bewitch me with your wondrous words. Do I love this you knew I would? YOUR writing is always enough to warm and grace the soul of whoever reads it, and you know I always do. Your words wrap a soul in light and warmth, and in this case you’ve written a beautiful dreamy delight. You know of course I love it utterly utterly, and you too. Superb writing, exquisite language usage and the flow is absolutely perfect As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I tip toed through the tulips On the feet of fantasy And kissed the nectar from her lips In a dreamers pot potpourri I rode a magic carpets flight Through heavens view of gold and blue And there stood small beneath lace white My every wish I wished comes true. She led me through a garden scene Of sun and golden daffodil One of Eden's velvet green Where waterfalls of stars did spill ===================================== And all around the odor myrrh For I was very deep in love ========================================== *smiling at your wile* Stinkylove...could this poem be any more gorgeous??? Stunning and starlit are your words. I have many times said you must talk rhyme in your sleep...now you dream in cadence and its so far beyond beautiful.     ~*~ I searched and searched that I might find The vision your words painted in my mind To discover the path above to Eden's gate Where doves of love kiss in moments of fate But no painting could ever come close to your compose To the splendor of when you pen of your rose of suppose ~*~ *winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, May all your weekends be pleasant. Marsha, You’re the catsup on my eggs And the sugar in my coffee For with you I’m ever pulling toffee. JM, If you would but hold my hand I’d walk with you this fairyland. And make new worlds, for us to see Beyond this world of gravity Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Seymour hi there now this is especially beautiful today, when I get the opportunity to get into here, and you know it’s always a problem of logistics, and whether I can get on mum’s computer when the others aren’t around, as I say when I get the opportunity I always make a point of seeking you out and it’s always worth the effort. Wonderful writing Emma    Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emma, Dear girl thank you so much for the read and bump. You and your family have become very dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I tip toed through the tulips On the feet of fantasy ========================== I just came back to say... those will be the coolest lines I'll read all day.   quote: gravity is so over-rated *L* Hand held out ... heart in hand *winkiewinkie* to me tulip-toed Stinky |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, you certainly inspired a lot of the poets....and some awesome pics to go along with some awesome words.... Thanx Sy... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your words truly are potpourri to these pages and bring great magic and inspiration to us all! (sigh) This is a delightful read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sy! Great mix! Very nicely done as usual! You got to love those replies from Janet don't ya?? He he she's a pet! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I take you by your heart and hand and off we go. Mangus, Yes she is a pet. Noah, A potpourri full of thanks. ethome, She is many things, she is my Tinkerbell. Thank you for the read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I think love blooms a garden in your words.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, That is the sweetest. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy here's a big ole' sigh  This is the most beautiful poem ever by you! It's definately a keeper!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Melissa, missed you |
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