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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-06-29 02:23 AM


If I don't hear a word
you shall not see my tears
for the years have trailed off
letters lost in the meaning
of friendship's worth.

Implied and yet again denied
sealing off my heart
stamps of myself
foretold in part
to those that never cared to read
I bid you well.

My mission is not to illicit
false advertisements
or happy holidays
or free vacations that never pay off.
Nor do I expect a rebate,
checked and unchecked
returned to sender
unclaimed.

Redirecting correspondence
crossed in the mail
limiting the time
where no ends meet upon arrival
and yet you always do
after I've ripped you apart
reading  over the riot act
one more time~~

Only you know how to send me
putting a rush on my thoughts
priority packaged
reaching me overnight~~

(sorry, just mopping up tonight, while waiting for the fed ex truck to arrive)  



© Copyright 2002 BluesSerenade - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-06-29 10:25 AM


I like the line only you know how to put a rush on my thoughts
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-06-29 03:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Lori, I too find it a wonderful feeling to be devoted to someone you love that you just want to hurry home or at least make an express impression, sweet friend, this is a fabulous on-the-spot write, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2002-06-29 03:41 PM


Quite a mop up job....well done!
It has my seal of approval every letter stamped with purpose. It totally enveloped me!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-06-29 03:47 PM


BluesSerenade
A nice write, enjoyed the read.

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-06-30 12:24 PM


Priority write.
Sandra

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2002-07-01 05:33 AM


bluezy, enjoyed the way to moving through this...well penned babe
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