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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2002-06-28 03:49 PM



the controller


the control
who does it most
what is the reason
that one thinks that control exsist
the one saying they are being controlled
usually is the controller themselves
demanding the changes
without making any themselfs
thinking that what they do
is the way it should be
and demanding changes
changes that means
I want the control
full control
total control
if no changes made
then the controller
calls the other the contoller
so who is the contoller
why does it happen
no control here
except out of control
that is it
the contoller
one that is
out of control



bernie


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Bernie Slicker

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-28 06:48 PM


bslicker,
do you need a hand taking back control?
profound poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-06-28 07:09 PM


I have thought about this alot...in my own failing marriage, being told I controlled him yet he was out doing his thing that I didn't want him to do...and  even  now in relationships being told I am too demanding, controlling when really nothing goes my way....
so who really is in control?

I can't even control my thoughts anymore...


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3 posted 2002-06-28 08:24 PM




(smiles) Oh Bernie, this is indeed a wonderful question, sweet friend, I suppose the controller is the motivating force in each of us and it is as if He or whatever we believe in is controlling us like remote-control! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!



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Love,
Noah Eaton

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