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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-06-28 12:40 PM


Oh how I miss my computer
It has all of my stuff on it
Now I have to use this make do
And my favorite places I can't visit

I'll never let him touch it again
Especially when he is angry
His anger gets the best of him
Then he takes it out on me

I looked all over trying to find
All the things I had saved
But, I can't seem to find them
Just because of his rage

He knows just how to get to me
Taking away the things I love
Thinking I will give into him
Trying to act like he is tough

So little did he realize
Each thing he takes away from me
I'll just find something else
To take it's place you see

You'd think he would know by now
His anger does not scare me
It only pushes me further away
But, this is something he can't see

By Sue 6-28-02

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (06-28-2002 11:53 PM).]

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Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-06-28 12:45 PM


Oh Sue....I am so sorry.  If I could just come down to Oklahoma and bring David with me....we could probably help you out.

But I really do like your poem, if thats any consolation.

~ big hugs of consolation

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-06-28 10:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so sorry to hear about your computer, sweet friend, I think we all face these dilemmas sometimes and I hope now it is in the process of being fixed! (sigh) This is excellet, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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