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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-06-28 08:46 AM


Weaving tapestries of dreams
with lovely images serene,
mosaic pictures painting life
remains of happiness and strife.
Tales are told of falling in love
'neath the starlit skies above.
Hearts touch when reaching out
that's what it's all about~
the lacing of thoughts divine
when quilling words of rhyme




Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-28-2002 08:48 AM).]

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-28 09:03 AM


Beautiful Donna...Just look at you go!
Great thoughts expressed here...love it sweetie.
~Hugs~

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-06-28 09:19 AM


GS,
I hear quilling is making a comeback and you have already brought it back in your poetry.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-06-28 09:21 AM


Gentle Spirit
Excellent my dear.

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2002-06-28 07:23 PM


Hello Donna

This was so wonderful and how easily I could relate.  Your words flowed like a tranquil stream.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-06-28 07:28 PM


This is lovely.  Joyce
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-06-28 07:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love this, you sure have been on a roll lately as I enjoy all the gorgeous words you write! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2002-06-29 03:11 AM


Someone's muse is all afire.  Very cool write with a flawless cadence and of course I do have a weakness for anything to do with rhyme though I sometimes do the free-verse thing.  Very much enjoyed the write.
Neeraja
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The Netherlands
8 posted 2002-06-29 04:14 AM


What a sweet poem...
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
9 posted 2002-06-29 04:17 AM


"the lacing of thoughts divine
when quilling words of rhyme"

Well you've done both of those so very well in this GS......great write!

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
10 posted 2002-06-29 08:46 AM


Beautiful poem, Donna.
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