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Open Poetry #21

This Love is Hate

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-06-28 01:48 AM

Hopeless & Restless
Rapidly diminishing
all accomplished peace

Tragedy Within
Unresolved conflicts of life
Deception sets in when the mood is weak

This Love is Hate
That we cover with the sheets
In hopes of returning
The favor she brings

My Debt is Paid
With shivers & chills
Of a Love that hates
chasing you

Languishing & Rejoicing
A Love that was
& never would be...

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

1 posted 2002-06-28 01:58 AM

Wow...powerfully stated and presented. I can surely relate to this so very well...~sigh~ Well done!

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-06-28 03:59 AM

I agree with Dulcinea so much on this one : really powerful poetry - I love the way you've brought out the first line to make the point; An absolutly brilliant piece . I enjoyed reading it .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-06-28 04:03 AM

Nicely done....

"Deception sets in when the mood is weak"

So true. The rest is right on too!

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

4 posted 2002-06-28 05:10 AM

Dulcinea ~ Your words of kindness move me; Thank You
Angelswing ~ You humble me with "Brilliant" Thank You
Ethome ~ You always bring a smile to my heart! Thank You
With Admiration
~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

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