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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-27 09:10 PM


Each time the ear
is victimized
by assault of noise so loud,
it leaves a ringing
in the head--
a tone is lost--a loss profound.
If this happens
regular--
should drum of ear be raped by waves--
total deafness
can occur--
and music is a dirge of grave.

I thought of this
and thought of you--
how each day I'm less surprised--
how oaths of love
now ring untrue--
I bury bits of us that died.

Tears (now rare) catch me off-guard.
I am bitter, cold, and hard.
Remember, please,
you wrote these rules
when I am deaf
to cries from you.


[This message has been edited by serenity (06-28-2002 12:11 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-27 09:23 PM



Do I ever understand....

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-06-27 09:35 PM


Damn, do I ever understand this!  And am more grateful than I can say that certain people no longer live under my stairs...lol.


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
3 posted 2002-06-27 10:35 PM


Whoah, I have *so* definitely been there. Though somehow he can't understand that I *am* now deaf to him. Y'd think a year would be enough, huh?

"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey)

Balladeer
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4 posted 2002-06-27 10:39 PM


Ouch! This one I can hear loud and clear...
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2002-06-27 10:42 PM


Very well said!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-06-28 07:30 AM


I thought of this
and thought of you--
how each day I'm less surprised--
how oaths of love
now ring untrue--
I bury bits of us that died.

Tears (now rare) catch me off-guard.
I am bitter, cold, and hard.
Remember, please,
you wrote these rules
when I am deaf
to cries from you.
=========================

the truth has a deafening roar that the heart hears as it hardens.
I've noticed when someone is blind...they shout?
heart-hugs baby
mothyme

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