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Tim
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0 posted 2002-06-27 09:04 PM



Across the breadth and depth of never,
Spans the bridge of our forever,
From first we met 'til evermore,
We'll sail as one 'cross heaven's floor,
Touching on moon's silver beams,
Cacooned within our ship of dreams,
Together we will ever be,
A' sail upon night's welkin sea.
I will be your captain; you my Lorelie,
As I steer unto the stars, to where the angels fly,
You are my goddess of the night, my darling Terpsichore,
Within my heart we'll ever sail, into night's evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-27 09:08 PM




(smiles) Oh Tim, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and your love always sail away on the silk seas and cast shadows of dreams come true against the moonlight! (sigh) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-06-27 09:13 PM



Ah, you used Terpsichore again...
I'm smiling

angelswing
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3 posted 2002-06-28 05:22 AM


Terpsichore ? - I'm thick, don't get it . Beautiful poem though ...
'From first we met 'til evermore,
We'll sail as one 'cross heaven's floor,'
... especially like that part . Such a gorgeous poem, the way you keep the sailing through the night theme is great .
Loved it, L.of.L. Tom .
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