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White Tears |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
White Tears It’s snowing like rain. Flakes so big they nourish dryness as I stand mouth open asking the sky why are you crying? The snowfall is like rush hour. Flakes swerving in and out determined to find either a cold place to melt or a child’s smiling face as she imagines her glorious snowman while humming the tune. The child is taken to a hot chocolate den. I see her in the windowsill by a lit candle. She’s blowing her pool of cocoa round and round. Frustrated, and with two hands she sets it by the candle, put her elbows on the sill, and watches rush hour. Someday down the road like this raining snow she’ll weave through the traffic hoping her destination will be her child’s warm face watching the sky cry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mable_sue A lovely write , enjoyed the read. |
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shadow74 Junior Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 12MI, Water world |
Very nice. I enjoyed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Elizabeth, I love this, sweet friend, and I know with all my heart as long as she follows her heart she will find all the warmth and delight along the road out of the snowstorm! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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