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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-27 03:16 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-06-27 03:18 PM



Cleverly...they do it oh so cleverly...

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2 posted 2002-06-27 04:53 PM


Marge:  This is incredible!  You are a master (or mistress) of your craft! tell me something, do you ever sleep?  I think you lie awake at night thinking up new and glorious surprises for us!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-06-27 05:02 PM


How do you do it??? Marvelous work!

Deb

shadow74
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4 posted 2002-06-27 05:22 PM


very clever marge, excelent work

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run ahead to catch it.
                  
                       Arab Proverb

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5 posted 2002-06-27 05:26 PM


I DONT care how you do it,
just KEEP doin it!!
Awesome Marge!!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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6 posted 2002-06-27 05:47 PM


WOW!!!  You must be magic.  Loved the presentation of this!


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-06-27 05:58 PM


Marge,
You are becoming a wiz at the computer. And the poetry is first class.

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8 posted 2002-06-27 06:03 PM


liked it
devina
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9 posted 2002-06-27 06:20 PM


You...my dearest Marge...are exceptional here...

I think you know it with this one...go ahead and smile!!!

You've mirrored my mind with a line or two sweet lady!!!

Love ya!
Devina

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2002-06-27 06:51 PM



Well, what's left for me to say...sigh

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-06-27 08:40 PM


Friends~
I think I have to thank my muse Ayrasela for this one .... sometimes she 'sees' things I don't~

Karilea~
Thank you hon .... love the reply~

BettyLou~
LOL ... actually I do sleep ... it's just that they come in my dreams too~
Thank you sweetie~

BloomingRose~
Thanks gal ... mysterious muse at play~
Good to see you !

Shadow~
Welcome to my wall~
Thank you so much~

GentleSpirit~
Tee-Hee-Hee ... heck ... I sure hope I can~
Love you gal~

MartieSis~
*huggers* ... I'm sooooo glad YOU like it~

Seymour~
Thank you ... the poetry is the motivation~

VanDana~
Thanks dear~

Devina~
*GRIN* ...
Love ya'

Titia~
Your *sigh* speaks loudly sweetie~
I've had this graphic for 10 months ..
'bout time I let it 'talk'~
Thank you hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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12 posted 2002-06-27 09:18 PM


WOW!!!! Marge, you are unbelievable, how did you manage to do it? Clever words and eye-catching graphics make a lethal combination !

I just loved this !

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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13 posted 2002-06-27 10:12 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is wonderful you never fail to write anything that I don’t adore, but sometimes your writing particularly sparkles, and this really does.

Sometimes your skill in shade and light utterly amaze me you truly write the most exquisite pieces and so often the graphic that you include actually becomes the art form itself. You really are utterly utterly amazing, and I’m so thrilled that I get to share these treasures of yours. You’ve no idea how inspiring you are.

Utterly utterly perfect darling heart, this really is exquisite

I wub you too
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Krissy
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14 posted 2002-06-28 01:02 PM


Auntie Margie girl this is awesome writing, I’ve been impressed today with all I’ve seen of your wondrous work but this particular one has an incredible power within it.

The graphic of course is beautiful but the conceptual manifestation of it is out of this world. Just try and work a phrase like that into a poem, well if anyone can it’s you

Truly this is stunningly well written and the presentation cannot be bettered I love it I really do
Is it illegal to bump so many of my favourite aunts poems? Tell them I’m sorry, I’m an innocent and don’t know any better Or you could tell them I would’ve bumped everyone else’s but I didn’t have time, They also aren’t my favourite aunt but that’s not the reason I didn’t bump them all  

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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15 posted 2002-06-28 04:19 PM


Yanno... if only my screen was a bit larger, I wouldn't have wasted QUITE so much time trying to turn my head upside down and read backwards. LOL But then... that's my life... break every nail trying to pick the lock only to find the door's open. *G*

This is wonderful, Marge... if you don't watch out, you're gonna impress me... even more than I am already. *G*


[This message has been edited by suthern (06-29-2002 03:31 PM).]

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16 posted 2002-06-28 06:31 PM


I just love the way you did this. And you always know the right words to put with the images too.
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17 posted 2002-06-29 12:38 PM


Auntie Margie girl hi there this is an amazing piece of writing I really admire the way this is written, naturally being from your pen it was always going to be beautiful and it really is superb. You are certainly incredibly creative and always your words are written with wonder and delight

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

cpalmer
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18 posted 2002-06-30 05:18 PM


Wow Marge!
Not only is the poem beautiful but you have done an awesome job on the graphic too!  I love this! thanks for sharing!
Hugs
Cindi

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19 posted 2002-06-30 06:32 PM


MyCafe~
Now ... 'unbelievable' I can believe~
Thanks hon .. just playing with some new ink~

MsMarshaLove~
I do love it when the blend comes together~
Had fun followng Ayrasela's directions~

Krissy~
Thanks hon .... ~
conceptual manefestations, huh ?
Well .... who knows ?


SweetSuthern~
You sent me to the floor in fits and gales of total laughter~
Can you believe that I could just SEE you ?
Total crackup !!!

SweetSuzieQzie~
I sure thank ya' gal~

Emma~
Thanks sweetie ... I try~
Nice knowing you like it~

Cindi~
I sure appreciate you gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2002-07-01 11:11 AM


Marge - missed this while I wass on vacation - it is so well done - great poetry - very cleverly presented - really like it - Paul
Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2002-08-20 10:54 AM


Paul~
Just playing 'catch up'~
Thank you so much~

***Krissy~
Yah ... I'm working on it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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