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ScrpyCJ
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since 2002-06-24
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0 posted 2002-06-27 02:21 PM


I don't know what to say,
My lips are welded shut,
My love for you will always grow and yet your slipping by,
I tell you each and every day,
I want to hold you near my heart,
I told you from the start I wanted more than just the love,
My love for you is strong and deep,
I wish this moment could last forever,
Say you love me just one time,
my heart will then shatter.

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2002-06-27 07:03 PM



Lovely poem, but don't 'hold' too tight or love will run away.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-27 07:47 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon love finds you again and welcomes with you a warm and happy smile! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-06-27 07:50 PM


What titia says is true. Enjoyed
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