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Open Poetry #21

For the Last Time

ScrpyCJ
New Member

since 2002-06-24

Posts 9

0 posted 2002-06-27 02:19 PM

The walls are closing in on me,
My life is slipping away,
My love wasn't truly my love,
She slowly turned away,
She coaxed me into her trap,
I shared my love with her,
We talked and shared some moments together,
She really didn't love me,
I know for this is not my love,
Because she lied to me,
She doesn't know one single thing,
that puts me piece by piece,
She used me like I was a rock,
I didn't see it,
Not even a bit,
Its because I loved her
And she didn't love me back,
Get out of my life,
Stay away from my heart,
You cheated your way through my heart,
For the last time.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

1 posted 2002-06-27 02:39 PM

The ultimate betrayal of trust...I like this!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-06-28 03:48 AM

Ouch... that really hurts, Love - does anyone actually know exactly what it is and more importantly weather you feel it and who you feel it for ? I think we've all felt what you describe :- that's what makes this such a great read, we can relate to it .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-06-28 04:01 AM

Good write and a good rebuttal!

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