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Escaping Words Ringing True
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Escaping Words Ringing True |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This is to be read as you are the writer of intensity and the world is your audience! In sheer terror my words escape In grandeur bonding they merge In wild abandonment they thrash about Fine tuned they glide on breathless skies I throw the seeds to the winds of the mind In special arrangement they fall A music called verse ringing true inside Planting ideas of inspiration for all Am I so special that my words mean more? That the fantastic resources within a readers soul Never for it is for the reader to inspire me Into the new heights of endless thought patterns A garden is nurtured, gloomed never to be the same Poems are to be pondered with readers of different faces With so many mood swings the words change season But still storm out in gentle understanding Sometimes pure division of an audience will adhere to the words Yet at times the focal point is crystal clear in a poetic masterpiece Yet the masters float between the two as if fine wine Intoxicating the reader to a inner universe of emotions While sobering in the dynamic stimulus of nature’s performance The uncertainty of the receiver tends to create tremendous anxiety Wrapping you up in the knots of your own uncertainty But as you see the people light up You unwind your intensity Spreading wings like peacocks Until the terror of another word escapes To be captured in depth later Email me if at davelyoung1@hotmail.com D.Lester Young (06/27/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey D. L. Young! You sure have the intensity part of this piece right. Very intense! Great thoughts on a roll! |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
Am I so special that my words mean more? That the fantastic resources within a readers soul Never for it is for the reader to inspire me Into the new heights of endless thought patterns Love this! Especiall the first line. Nice work. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
'In sheer terror my words escape In grandeur bonding they merge In wild abandonment they thrash about Fine tuned they glide on breathless skies' ... Fantastic start and I love the link between this verse (The speaking) and this ... 'Sometimes pure division of an audience will adhere to the words Yet at times the focal point is crystal clear in a poetic masterpiece Yet the masters float between the two as if fine wine Intoxicating the reader to a inner universe of emotions While sobering in the dynamic stimulus of nature’s performance.' ...(The listening) . The natural discriptive imagery you use is fantastic... I liked the way you kept coming back to the turmoil and storm idea . Loved it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. [This message has been edited by angelswing (06-28-2002 05:08 AM).] |
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