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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-06-27 10:37 AM

Maybe
This was love,
When you held me tight
Maybe,
next time
We will meet again
Here comes the rain
Being together
WE are holding
For a long time
Maybe,
This Is love
When you and I
Are meant to be
Next time
Will be right time
For us
To go on,
Maybe this was love
That took us
Into higher above
Maybe
next time
We can say
those words again
It Is now and never

Because next time
will be late
too late

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-27-2002 10:38 AM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-06-27 11:43 AM

Well said. A very affecting poem.

Nan

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-06-27 04:21 PM

just goes to show you my friend. . . there isn't always a next time. . .

great job. . .

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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-06-27 05:50 PM

enjoyed your thoughts V

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-06-27 06:01 PM

vandana
Enjoyed

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-06-27 07:31 PM

I'm beginning to feel this sense of urgency. Great poem Vandana!

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-06-27 07:34 PM

(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this be the time and may true loves beauty always fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) If not always believe in it the second time around, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-06-27 09:32 PM

Very beautiful. I keep hoping it is never too late But not so sure.
Hugs
Sandra

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

8 posted 2002-06-27 09:33 PM

Very nice Vandana, I like your poem a lot.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-06-27 09:38 PM

Vandana, you always speak
from your heart...

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

10 posted 2002-06-27 09:41 PM

Would make a good song. Enjoyed the read.

Deb

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