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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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wear for me the vine laces woman of willow skin drift me to your grotto sigh fabric let my mind be a centaur there beckon the fauns of bacchus with your siren sound songs bless me with title then of sommelier of your sauvignon we shall be seamless dreams and seque into some tomorrow sky that opens her arms with bare glass dawn and bosom warm for lovers pressed faces we will be wilderness plummets of crystalline ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads, what a Raphaelian picture you have painted...do it again! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
so much magick abounding here this morning... you leave me enchanted! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wear for me the vine laces woman of willow skin drift me to your grotto sigh fabric let my mind be a centaur there Ds has arrived.... Good mornin Dark. *s* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, Good Morning lady...(toasting with a starbucks running out the door) Thanks for the sweet wave of your eyes. Serene1, my blessing and pleasure to enchant one so enchanting, thanks hon GS, Good Morning ms Donna, slow hugs and thanks for the soft of your voice touch [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-27-2002 07:01 AM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh my gosh...I do believe you are Dionysus..pour us another darling..big glass..WRITE..please.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, gotta jumbo tommy tippy if ya want? so pleased to wriggle your cravy ms, thanks |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think I've snorted some of that before?...interesting poem with some great diction.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger She eyes the sparkle of three carrots while the donkey heaves and stretches his neck. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS The fabric you write on is made of silk, your pen dipped in songbird's dictionary. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Very awesome. Though I suppose the mentioning of Bacchus had me biased from then on in.  "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful, D. A softer side, woven with mysteries and myths of olde. Cor |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beckon the fauns of bacchus with your siren sound songs bless me with title then of sommelier of your sauvignon we shall be seamless dreams and seque into some tomorrow sky that opens her arms with bare glass dawn and bosom warm for lovers pressed faces ============================== looking up words in the dictionary was NEVER this sexy back in school  ROFLAWESOME write of theme, vocab and imagery DS you take words and make them slow burn... I'll admit to inhaling. LOLWhen your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, I too truly think you are Dionysus, may your heart always flow with loves wine and may you always dance in the gardens and meadows and have dreams splashed in Van Gogh pastels! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh, l would like to jump right into this poem. Sandra |
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