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dwarfdroppings
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since 2002-06-26
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0 posted 2002-06-27 05:05 AM


The morning petals open
As it settles in to place
And I look down beside me
To drink your morning grace

The mornings treat you kindly
As the light upon your face
Makes it seem translucent
And my feelings for you race

Your name is on my anxious lips
But my breath is held so tight
I cannot even whisper it
So let you end your night

To watch you in the morning
In wonder I delight
Then waste away my daytimes
Looking forward to the night


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-06-27 05:56 AM


~softsmiles~....an enjoyable read this morning
thank you
M

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2 posted 2002-06-27 06:06 AM


What wonderful writing I have found here.
Welcome.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-06-27 07:20 AM


Welcome to PiP’s, this is utterly wonderful writing, I’m sure you’ll find this a delightful place, and I’m glad you’re here, well come here indeed
  

I wub you too
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-27 11:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write, this is delightful! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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