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Temptress
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0 posted 2002-06-27 02:26 AM


I will never fade
neither will my voice
for love I have crossed more troubles than this.
Far too many moments invested to lay down my weapons here
and walk away unwound.
I do not ache with lonliness
I walk with welcome on a red carpet
that will never trick my feet
into an empty fall.
No one has ever been able to silence my words.
~~~no one~~~

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
devina
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Cali
1 posted 2002-06-27 02:38 AM


You just tell it like it is Jen...
now you KNOW I like it....with my mouth and all???

I've missed you girlie!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



dwarfdroppings
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since 2002-06-26
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2 posted 2002-06-27 04:57 AM


Far too many moments invested to lay down my weapons here..........Some great lines here. I liked it a lot.

Rgds
Dwarfy
  

Only my opinion, if you require a gaurantee............buy a toaster!

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-06-27 05:59 AM


I walk with welcome on a red carpet
that will never trick my feet
into an empty fall.
No one has ever been able to silence my words.
~~~no one~~~

Jen I have seen so much growth, so much strength in your words.....well done gal.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Marsha
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4 posted 2002-06-27 07:15 AM


Jen darling girl, we missed you around here, this is wonderful writing absolutely wonderful writing


I wub you too
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

vandana
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5 posted 2002-06-27 10:45 AM


enjoyed
Corinne
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state of confusion
6 posted 2002-06-27 12:36 PM


That's right, sister - you just keep on writing those words down!

Cor

Sven
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7 posted 2002-06-27 04:14 PM


when it comes right down to it. . . words are all that we have, and all that we are. . . take those away. . . and there's nothing left. . .

well done. . .powerful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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