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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-27 01:18 AM


Love's Mountains Surround
Fruit from hope's tree falling down
To doubt's valley floor

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-06-27 01:48 AM


You know I love this, right?!
I can't wait to finish our duet
you possess such talent

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-06-27 02:07 AM


Kris,
Smokin'! Hope nobody stops you.

Show you care to those you love...today.

angelswing
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3 posted 2002-06-28 04:39 AM


Short and sweet, just how I like it; lovely work .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-06-28 09:06 AM


Kris,
loved the last line, loved the whole thing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-06-28 09:09 AM


Love how you do these Kris...
Keeps me smiling....
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-28 09:25 AM


Krishankins
Good one, enjoyed.

vandana
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7 posted 2002-06-28 09:37 AM


enjoyed
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