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jge84
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since 2002-06-27
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IL USA

0 posted 2002-06-27 01:01 AM


I don't know why I bother,
I don't know why I try.
I am just worried,
That they're all going to die.

They won't stop,
not even for a day.
I wish I could do something,
I wish there was a way.

But I suppose
There's nothing I can do.
But I hope they know,
They are hurting me, too.

If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe.

© Copyright 2002 Joshua Grant Eastham - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
1 posted 2002-06-27 01:10 AM


They usually don't start caring until it's too late. If I'm getting the message right.


Very good. I hope to see more of your work here.

Welcome to Passions!!

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
2 posted 2002-06-28 03:33 AM


Awwww, I hear a lot of pain behind this one, just remember that if you smile the world smiles with you . Lovely poem .
L.of.L. Tom .
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ps. WELCOME, you've made a great start .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

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