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jge84
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since 2002-06-27
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IL USA

0 posted 2002-06-27 12:57 PM


Death come to me,
and set me free.
I hate my life,
and my life hates me.

I feel so alone,
so dark and cold.
I have no one to cherish,
I have no one to hold.

I just want to curl
up in a ball and die.
I want to leave this cruel world,
without saying goodbye.

So Mr. Reaper,
I beg of thee.
Come to me,
and set me free.


© Copyright 2002 Joshua Grant Eastham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-27 01:06 AM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh Joshua, I can feel such sadness and despair i your powerful debut, sweet friend, you have come to the right place for many of us have had these feelings but deep down you are special and we are all here to share our hearts with you! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joshua, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! Ooohhhhhh..and please check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joshua, thank you for sharing!

  

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
2 posted 2002-06-27 02:52 AM


Joshua--

You have a rare gift for clarity of expression.  Here's wishing you a happier tomorrow and happier times to express.

Shenachie

dwarfdroppings
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since 2002-06-26
Posts 6
UK
3 posted 2002-06-27 04:51 AM


This is very powerful.....I liked the way it was put together, just hoping you don't really feel like this......your too good!

Only my opinion, if you require a gaurantee............buy a toaster!

MIdsummerRain
Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
4 posted 2002-06-27 05:13 AM


Tell me you do not truly belive this , my friend... Your gift for clarity, is indeed rare; I wish you  more tomorrows to be as happy as well ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-06-27 06:51 AM



Welcome to Passions, and thanks you for expressing what I cannot, a truly sad piece.  Now let's hit the other extreme and see how you do!  Looking forward to reading more from you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
6 posted 2002-06-27 08:03 AM


Death....you will know me by my touch...it will be your last....I remember several nights I'd go to bed and pray: Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray you Lord my soul to keep, if I should die before I wake....thank you God...
GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
7 posted 2002-06-27 12:25 PM


All I can say is keep fighting the demons.  And keep trying to articulate the horror.
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