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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-26 09:22 PM


If I were a star....
I would ask to shine in your eyes
until the darkness of eternity
takes my light away.

If I felt your love burning
deep within the depths of
our cauldron’s fire as the steam
of passions rose into the air
of our linger.

I would stoke the fire
until the last twig of wood
fell from my bleeding
fingers.

You are the fire
of my hottest night
as sweats of lust fall
in rivers onto
our bare feet.


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-06-26 09:25 PM


Barry

Wooohooo...sounds like love to me!

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2 posted 2002-06-26 09:26 PM



Whew...shining AND warm...

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(smiles) Oh Barry, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I bet to her you truly are a star and she will always se that twinkle in your eyes of compassion and heartfelt love and will always be blessed to have it shared with you! (sigh) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-26 09:32 PM


Well, roll them puppies up and wade in it darlin'..sorry..couldn't help myself. Smile at your mean heat..that's a compliment.

Sincerely,
Reg

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5 posted 2002-06-26 09:39 PM


Martie....If you only knew just how pooped I
am tonite....it would be icicycles under
the cauldron....  My bones are going to lie
down early....Thanx lady....

Sun....I had to give something to keep Nancy
warm up in Canada where the AirCon is not
working well....  And I wanted to see if I
could put a smile on your face this evening.
HUGS...

Noah....thank you my friend....how is that
firehose doing....???

Reg...You,  the ....loss for words...

Anywhooo.....You are the best at heat and
I do feel complimented when I get words like
those from you....Thanx...

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6 posted 2002-06-26 09:48 PM


Delicious! ThisDiamond
Magnus
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7 posted 2002-06-26 09:49 PM


Kathy....your welcome....

What sort of stew was I cooking....

Hmmmmmm????


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8 posted 2002-06-26 09:57 PM


Barry's....ON FIRE!!


Magnus
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9 posted 2002-06-26 10:03 PM


(Magnus fanning the fire of Nancy's Post)

Where is the firehose?????

Thanx Nance....hope the air is working
better tonite...???

HUGS again...

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10 posted 2002-06-26 10:39 PM


Wow,very warm in here. I love this, your wife is so lucky to have a guy like you   writing poetry for her.
Sandra

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