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qwerty
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since 2002-06-26
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0 posted 2002-06-26 08:14 PM


you know what
you suck
im not gonna lie
i hope you get chased by some girlscout
and trip over your grandma and die

i hope a rabbit chases you into your yard
and it hides so you cant see it
and for a minunte you let down your gaurd
and it jumps on you and mauls your face

i hope you go out to get your mail
and an ice cream truck runs over your dog
and the bumper getss stuck on its tail
and drags it for 4 blocks

and you try to chase after it
but your leg breaks off and you fall down
and then your trying to claw ur way to the curb
but you get distracted by some gay homo clown

you laugh at the silly clown
he squirts some liquid on you and it burns
you keep laughing until you look down
and realize that it burned your face off

so then the clown steals your watch
and sells it to a pawn shop
you start to yell but then a garbage truck tips over near you
and you choke on a dust mop


and thats the end of you my friend
your dead
the end

© Copyright 2002 qwerty - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-26 08:33 PM



Welcome to Passions, qwerty.  This is obviously a fairly dark and angry poem, so I will bet a dime to a dollar that you will enjoy our Dark forum when you get your bearings and look around our home.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-06-26 09:03 PM


Welcome to the forum. I hope you enjoy your time here - there are many places for you to learn and grow in your craft.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-26 09:09 PM




WOW!!! This is a powerfully emotional and striking first post, sweet friend, I hope this is a feeling that no longer applies to you, know you are always welcome to also post in Dark also, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

    

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
4 posted 2002-06-26 09:53 PM


Yowza, someone made you hoppin' mad!

Cor

devina
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Cali
5 posted 2002-06-26 11:08 PM


First of all...lemme welcome you to our site!!!

Secondly, I have to applaud you on your dark humour here/ venting...

I enjoyed!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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