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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-26 04:06 PM


you are new metal sounds
machined smooth with polish saliva
I taste the ball bearings
of your slide skin gearing

you smile at me wicked eyed
with your ears plugged
to keep the noise of our whispers
from touching more then just skin

you say my leather hurts you there
and that your soul leaks cry salt
when I put you against me
with your inside outside

you beg for crave slavery
and handcuffs without keyholes
I bring you mirrors full
of my face wanting to watch

you cover my eyes with wet hand gloves


©Dark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-26 05:11 PM



It's 94 degrees outside and stormy...and 110 degrees inside and thundering... yikes....

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-26 07:06 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love how you take a typical object and make it seem so new and phenominal that only your wonderful surreal art can do! (sigh) This is absolutely splendid, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-28-2002 12:20 AM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-26 07:24 PM


Dark~If I were to try and speak right now..
a trail of gibberish would come forth..
therefore I shall sit here and
drool on my keyboard!!
DANG you're good!
~Evening hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

rwood
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4 posted 2002-06-26 09:28 PM


you smile at me wicked eyed
with your ears plugged
to keep the noise of our whispers
from touching more then just skin


You always do that. You always touch the reader beyond..just skin. Have I told you lately that your mind..is gorgeous?

Sincerely,
Reg

Corinne
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state of confusion
5 posted 2002-06-26 09:43 PM


Wet, very.

Cor

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-06-26 10:25 PM


hmmm........
mmmmm........
drool.........
no words hon, just lotsa thoughts and maybe one or two memories from some really cool stories.....*wink*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2002-06-27 06:29 AM


Lady E, thanks hon for the sweet whispers

Regina, thank you for the read babe, you like my mind?  you may be in trouble now then..(grin)

Cor, thanks babe for the read and for the tickle

GS, just some close ups Donna...thanks for peeking in

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

8 posted 2002-06-27 12:35 PM


you are jessie james
customized poetry

metal words
bent, curved and hammered
by hand

some flame-lick painted,
others dipped in chrome

leaving them jaw-dropped
as you ride by.


Can feel that wind in my hair, DS... *s*

Indigo




Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
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in the interzone now
9 posted 2002-06-27 10:40 PM


Now *this* is a yummy li'l specimen. More people should write poems of such themes.

"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey)

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10 posted 2002-06-28 12:16 PM


"you smile at me wicked eyed
with your ears plugged
to keep the noise of our whispers
from touching more then just skin"

this sparked me.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
11 posted 2002-06-28 02:20 AM


you smile at me wicked eyed
with your ears plugged

We hear what we want to hear, or so I've been told...Lord knows I try~  That little line spoke volumes, and is my cross to bear.

Nice write DS~

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