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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-26 03:39 PM



You make my harnessed soul believe

Your muffled waterfall's sputtering
chance lands in the drying river
        inside my heart.

Your affection has replinished me

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
my3monkeytoes
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1 posted 2002-06-26 03:41 PM


I'm so thirsty now.  
Nice write!
~Sydney McLean

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2 posted 2002-06-26 03:44 PM


Kris

Wonderful how that happens sometimes!  Very well expressed!

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3 posted 2002-06-26 07:53 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Kristopher, this is soooooo beautiful and so happy, sweet friend, we are all so happy and we wish this true love to blossom in your heart forever! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet firend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-27 10:39 AM


All things come by chance...

hope your luck is better than mine Kris...

really enjoyed your word flow here...
if I said purdy, would you be offended???

take care sweets...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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5 posted 2002-06-27 10:40 AM


enjoy
Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-06-27 10:41 AM


I'm so unused to reading hopeful things. Truly awesome.

"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey)

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7 posted 2002-06-28 12:03 PM


You surprised me with the term "affection"... and it was a very pleasant surprise. *S* So many of us think only romantic love can moisten the dry husk our hearts become when left alone... only to find our thirst quenched from unexpected sources. *S* I like this very much. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (06-28-2002 12:04 PM).]

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