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Krishankins
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Apathetic rays of sun
Shine down to tan the world
Your magnetic shadows pull me
My head begins to swirl

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-26 02:19 PM



Shine on...

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Is the sun ever apathetic? Interesting concept. I enjoyed your poem.
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(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know your love must swoon every time you read these to her! (sigh) You are a true modern romeo, sweet friend, keep these delightful gems up, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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