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Drowned in a raindrop
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Drowned in a raindrop |
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dwarfdroppings New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 6UK |
Like a raindrop you entered my life Liquid, alive and agleam You gently soaked through my skin Then the raindrop turned into a stream Sometimes your ripples are calm And sometime you flow as in storm I don’t mind the change in your mood Because always your waters are warm Your comforting rhythms engulf I’m lost in your currents I know Your tide rose up over my head And drowned me a long time ago |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. That's an interesting penname, some day I would like to hear of its origins... Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes your ripples are calm And sometime you flow as in storm I don't mind the change in your mood Because always your waters are warm =========================== this is lovely...a cadence kissed treat to read aloud. Wonderful poetic analogy and phrasing. Welcome to Poetry Land. You make a grand entrance with this...hope to read more of you. jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very impressive first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! You come rising in here with waves of fabulous poetic beauty in this splashing sensational debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble family. I enjoyed your entry poem and sure do look forward to reading more from you. And you've got a cool website too!! Welcome!  |
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