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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-26 08:18 AM



Charmed

feeling you asleep
held within a precious spoon
sweeter dreams tonight


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-26 09:00 AM


Helen, this is perfect!
What a wonderful vision
and feeling this gives the reader.
Love it!
~Hugs~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-06-26 09:10 AM


Helen,
Lovely just lovely.

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-06-26 12:02 PM


Ah, spoon in June
Well done with vivid imagery.
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2002-06-26 11:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may love always charm you in your dreams and bring a smile to your face every day, sweet friend, I love this vision, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

turtlefreak1979
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5 posted 2002-06-27 06:39 PM


so short and sweet yet so thought provoking!!
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