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I let you cause
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I let you cause |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California 
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As tomorrow fades away to dust, Tonight becomes the two of us, And I lose myself, far behind, The misconceptions of your lies. Traffic bares a heavy load, As a story will be told, All the beauty that is me, And all that you have failed to see. Firing rage becomes a lust, That I really wouldnt miss that much, Passions flame is soon put out, As you stand there without doubt. A confidence that bleeds me dry, Wounded deep inside I try, To take this heart and keep it safe, For beneath your hands I soon will break. Dangling fingers through my hair, Soft whispers that pretend you care, Streams of kisses pouring down, Upon my soul that should be bound. Lying eyes that taunt me so, More than you could ever know, Tender pains that break inside, Wondering how long I can hide....... The pain I let you cause.. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Never feel the need to hide sis... you know your heart and this is not enough for you. I know that just as you do... besides, you deserve the cuddle-forever mode in which I thrive... and you will find it...I know (in smirl we trust)  Loev you sis... Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
D is right, you shouldn't settle for less than you deserve. a poetic heart deserves nothing less than Shakespearean love. Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This happens sometimes in realtionships but all you can do is move away from the situation or stay. It's up to you to determine what you want. I hope you choose what's best for you. I really enjoyed this though. I guess it's because I can relate. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amber~ Lovely emote my friend~ You're a remarkable young woman~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Amber, I am so sorry you've went through all of this, sweet friend, no one ever deserves to be treated this way and I hope you find the true love of compassion you deserve so much soon! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
I know tanny once agian your right... I need to just pounce..as you would say right??  pounce I will sista..pounce I will!!!! Kris- thank you much babe....I seem to forget that from time to time Marge- you know me all to well.... (god forbid she wander into the nasties huh??) *blushes* Mistletoe- thanks agian babe for the sweet words..are always appreciated.... |
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