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The Release
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The Release |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
The Release Two nights ago the dark began to wail like a delicate child raging from a skinned knee. In His new comicbook it seemed God had transformed into Electricman. Harsh bolts began bleeding from His palms. Seconds passed, and God bellowed. He was a roaring lion announcing his presence to His kingdom below. The roaring ceased. The great superhero huffed ceaselessly. The outside maple bent at his will. Piercing and unannounced came the sterlie tears pleading with hope for a lesser wail and calmer maples. Lying there, cushioned by trapped feathers I heard Him. I felt his release. So powerful, I began to pray innocently adding to another wailing eve. |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Don,t be afraid, the sun is close at hand and God's smile is just as moving. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi, Welcome to passions. Please check your e mail for a special greeting.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Sit back, relax, read, post a poem...I think you're going to like it around here! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I'm positive you will love it here! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mable_sue Welcome and you will love it here. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome to PIP. I happen to really enjoy thunder storms. I look forawrd to reading mor of your creations. INclan |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh Elizabeth, this is soooooo powerfully striking and filled with His spiritual love, sweet friend, what an electrifying debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Elizabeth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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