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sweet solitude

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darkling
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altered state of mind


0 posted 06-25-2002 10:12 PM       View Profile for darkling   Email darkling   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darkling

She sits down and she writes.
She has nothing better to do
with her time. She writes about the girl
she is.
She's isolated herself from
everything she's know. Blue
is her new favorite color.
She lives through romantic movies,
and sappy romance books. It gives
her something to look forward to. Love.
Sadness has become her vocabulary,
though you wouldn't think it to look.
She tries to hard to appear happy,
buoyant, and energetic. She acts well.
She long for love, yet holds back.
To her, rejection is inevitable.
People tell her
that she is beautiful,
but she shrugs it off, not believing.
She watches other happy pairs
with a feeling
of despair.
One day, she tells herself, you will be happy.
Just hang on.
If only she would take her own advice.
Instead, she sits and she writes. Writes about
the girl she is.
She is ME

[This message has been edited by darkling (06-25-2002 11:33 PM).]

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ecrivan
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since 12-10-2001
Posts 3983
my own state


1 posted 06-25-2002 10:15 PM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

I wrote a poem with you in mind darkling, feedback to the Young, you might like to read it ..welcome to Passions and continue to write..there's a powerhouse of talent here.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-25-2002 10:18 PM).]

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City of Roses


2 posted 06-25-2002 10:17 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggssssss) Oh Annika, this is so very sad but heartfelt, sweet friend, that may be you now but I also know you will be that happy soul soon and joy will be yours to have forever! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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displaced


3 posted 12-31-2002 03:20 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

and me
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


4 posted 06-15-2004 03:48 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nothing wrong with that...James
 
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