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Hand In Glove
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Hand In Glove |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Hand In Glove By: Noah Eaton 6/25/02 So you've finally helped me figure out who I am Everything I couldn't be, you convinced me I can You showed me Tigris and I lead you to find Euphrates Your infinite beauty is like a bowl of chrysantheum minestrone Here from the mountains I present to you the constellations Reading your freckles and finding connections And I took your request for peace seriously You encase my heart in chain mail in case I become finicky This is the moment, this is the time I've made up my mind between bliss and sacrifice Alarm me in case I failed to notice What this is you want and if it's part of my business You have welcomed me Hand in glove And I have found you Falling in love Tell me, where do you want to go We have nothing to lose Tell me now Are we due Sometime soon To Brigadoon For our honeymoon... Now I have found the heather on the hill You have discovered a place without gravity where I restore my will I was sent on a secret mission from God to seek your heart of gold Through your eyes I see a light as vivid as the sunrise over Camino Capistrano This is the moment, this is the time I've made up my mind between bliss and sacrifice Alarm me in case I failed to notice What this is you want and if it's part of my business You have welcomed me Hand in glove And I have found you Falling in love Tell me, where do you want to go We have nothing to lose Tell me now Are we due Sometime soon To Brigadoon For our honeymoon... It has been so long for me to find what I'm looking for outside the box I have searched so long to find that of you who bears the key to a true loves door that now unlocks... This is the moment, this is the time I've made up my mind between bliss and sacrifice Alarm me in case I failed to notice What this is you want and if it's part of my business You have welcomed me Hand in glove And I have found you Falling in love Tell me, where do you want to go We have nothing to lose Tell me now Are we due Sometime soon To Brigadoon To croon sweet tunes For our honeymoon... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-25-2002 09:30 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Noah, i wish you the best of love. This is straight out of the book of wonderful. Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
"I was sent on a secret mission from God to seek your heart of gold" I love that part. This is really good Noah! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, happiness shines out of you...but you don't want to go to Brigadoon...all that singing and dancing Yuk!!! Lovely soft poem and a journey of discovery. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The melody is beautiful Noah. ThisDiamond |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
You, who are the instructor of the Dance of Love are also the writer of the Songs of Joy. tSr |
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