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ScrpyCJ
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0 posted 2002-06-25 09:26 PM


Stating my case,
Living my life,
My brain is trembling,
My heart is Barricading,
Everyone is fake,
No one is real,
Showing my feelings, Dealing my feelings,
Can you understand, it’s not always me,
My heart is towards one girl,
My mind is on a fight,
My soul is on the school,
My mouth is talking loud,
Everything is changing,
I can no longer deal,
Why is it, its always me.
You say people have it worse,
I say it’s not true,
I have it the worst right now,
I’m running in four directions,
Everyone is twisting my words,
I try and lay it out,
I opened my mouth, I already did wrong,
Why is it the girls, I want to be with aren’t true,
They ruin my lives, they trample my soul,
The friends that I have,
Oh, they just can’t understand,
I am not going to step down,
My feelings are strong,
My friends did me wrong,
If you did me wrong,
Farewell,
Try and fix the issue,
But don’t fake it out.
You tell me I’m sweet,
Oh you tell me I'm cute,
The best is when you say,
“You’ll find that sweet girl”
Why do you say all of these lies?
You know it’s not true,
You know you’re so cruel,
Faking my heart,
Faking my soul,
You treat me as if I do no understand,
Come on now friend,
You know me quite well,
Keep it real,
Or keep it out.
The School is danger,
It keeps it unsafe,
The teachers are wrong,
The hallways are small,
Cannot you not understand?
That price we cannot afford,
That school is ****,
We won’t get it back.
Switching the school,
Oh, but I’m switching my friends,
Won’t miss you at all,
Won’t miss you that bit,
All I want is for you to keep it real,
Are you faking me out?
Fake this out,
Get out!

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1 posted 2002-06-25 09:39 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and while it may feel like a big time for all your dreams to come true, I know that they are right and soon you will find that sweet girl and you will find true joy! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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