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darkling
Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2002-06-25 09:24 PM


feed me feed me
I beg of you.
give my creative outlet
something to do.

let me know just how im doing
please send me feedback and look me up in the archives, i would appreciate it sooo much,
Thanks, Darkling

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-25-2002 09:46 PM).]

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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2002-06-25 09:44 PM


a feedback or two
as long as you don't get blue...
keep the pen in your hand
write what you understand
and if not let it ride
your spirit will guide...

welcome to Passions


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-25-2002 09:46 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-06-25 11:36 PM


Thanks for the reminder, darkling....
I will look for more from you...
in the meantime, this one is very good.

~ feedback hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-26 03:14 PM


Some need goin' on, is there? Well, I'm happy t' oblige. Nice post!

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

my3monkeytoes
Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze
4 posted 2002-06-26 03:32 PM


"feed me, feed me"

This is reminiscent of "Little Shop of Horrors"!  In this give-take world, isn't it nice to know you can come here, to PIP, and express, write, C R E A T E (the "give"), only to be acknowledged by other givers?  

Your writing is great!

~Sydney McLean

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