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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-25 09:08 PM



Within The Circle

~*Marge Tindal*~

Quiet is the circling of friends
Gentle abide at friendship's fireside
Tender caring in heart-sharing
This is where poetry resides~

A home
without...........a wall
Our.......~P..........haven
without......~I.........ends
A circle we....~P...all call
Our...............Family
of Friends !



~Ron Carnell ... Thank you
for giving our poetic voices a place to be heard~
June 25, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-06-25 09:13 PM


MT,

I love your style. This is a lovely piece


Kris

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Sunshine
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There's no place like a PiP's Home...

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-06-25 09:17 PM


clicking my red shoes together......
ok oz........take me there!!  Love it.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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4 posted 2002-06-25 10:22 PM


Hon, it may be raining but it doesn't seem to have had any negative effect on your effort to write some interesting words and creative styles.

The poems are flowing along with the rain water.  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-06-25 10:41 PM


Wow...you did this very beautifully, Marge...
I am sure that Ron will love it.

~ hugs from a home without walls

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-06-25 10:53 PM


Marge:  Thank you for being our spokesperson in thanking Ron for the site here.  It's a great site and he deserves thanks from all of us.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-06-25 10:54 PM


Marge, what a wonderful tribute to Ron and PIP !

I so love this place too !

mycafe

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8 posted 2002-06-26 12:48 PM


Marge,
If I can't be clever...I'm glad I have you! Thanks dear friend, it feels so good.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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9 posted 2002-06-26 01:01 AM


How did you do that?  This is absolutely wonderful and thank you for saying what I couldn't.

Shenachie

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10 posted 2002-06-26 06:02 AM


Ditto from me to Ron...Wonderful tribute, Marge! I am very grateful for this poetic home where I have grown and met so many beautiful friends...Hugs, Ellie

                

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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11 posted 2002-06-26 07:23 AM


Dear margie girl, you always have the best ways of encircling poetry and friendship all in one. well done on another masterpiece both in content and vision.
~HUGS~ to ya
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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12 posted 2002-06-26 08:04 AM


You are unbelievable
You have a sleeve she come out

Muys

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13 posted 2002-06-26 08:25 AM


Margie girl darling sister of my I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it.

The depth of this place is encapsulated in this brilliant jewel of writing. You know I love it when you get creative. Perfect poetry beautifully designed but a Master craftswoman. I love it love it love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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14 posted 2002-06-26 08:55 AM


Margie, this is a lovely piece, as I'm sure you are....
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15 posted 2002-06-26 09:02 AM


This is beautiful, Marge. *S*
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16 posted 2002-06-26 09:04 AM


Marge,
Wonder of wonders you always delight me.

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17 posted 2002-06-26 02:33 PM


this is exceptional, should be sent to every new member who joins the 'family'
wonderful work marge

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18 posted 2002-06-26 02:54 PM


Marge--Seems like you said it for us all..and just right, too!  Thanks!
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19 posted 2002-06-28 01:32 PM


It's so wonderful to have this family of friends! Marge are you reading my mind?  This is beautifully put!  And yes Thanks Ron!
Hugs
Cindi

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20 posted 2002-06-28 01:51 PM


You got it babes...this is perfect!!

Love ya!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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21 posted 2002-06-28 02:07 PM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2002-07-03 04:28 PM


Thank you ALL so very much~
I certainly have felt the circling of friends~

You all are just the BEST~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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