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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands

0 posted 2002-06-25 08:32 PM



How could you ever think of it
And I'm not even a man!!!
Shaved today
Against my will
Helplessly
I surrendered
No choice I had
in this matter
I'm a lady,
You're a lady,
They didn't shave you!
Naked I feel

Sincerely,
Jip


Well Jip, as you may see
Not much to shave on me
Watching you
in sheepish clothes
Special shepherd's frock
Boots on me legs
wet toes
Nope,
No shave for me
today

Sincerely,
Titia




Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (06-25-2002 08:43 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-06-25 08:38 PM


It's nice to see you shear your sheep; in New Zillund they don't shear their sheep with anyone.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-25 09:03 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I guess that one wants to be one of those hippy sheep! LOL! This is so adorable, sweet friend, I just love the words and pictures you share, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-25 09:16 PM



I like both your offering Titia, and Kethry's tongue-in-cheek...a bit baaahd...but oh well!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-06-25 10:29 PM


Titia~
I am sooooooooooooooooo looking forward to you bringing that sense of humor to Florida in September~

LOVE YOU~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
5 posted 2002-06-25 10:35 PM


Are you going to bring some sheep with you too, Titia?

~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii
6 posted 2002-07-25 03:09 AM


okay i don't shave is that the message, whatis it, i don't get it, thoughti hope it is a helpless cry for the will of hair to grow.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


suthern
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7 posted 2002-07-26 09:36 AM


Poor Jip... such a long-suffering look on her face. *S* But now that it's over, I'd bet she's enjoying being cooler. *G*

I enjoyed this, Titia... and loved Keth's reply. LOL

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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8 posted 2002-07-26 09:54 AM


Awww Titia! I love it when you share your sheep with us.
Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
9 posted 2002-07-29 02:13 PM


Thanks for sharing your shearing, Titia...
A cute poem and I love the pics too.
~ hugs from a furry chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
10 posted 2002-07-29 03:26 PM


Funny Titia!!!  And the pictures are nice!  Impressive horns this sheep has!

Liefs...  

Neeraja

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
11 posted 2002-07-29 04:35 PM


All I have to say sweetie? you look awful cute in braids...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (07-29-2002 08:17 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2002-07-29 07:00 PM


Titia - the shleep was shared, or was the shared shleep spared? Oh my, I'm confused...
Cute write...

BC

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

13 posted 2002-07-29 09:29 PM


Dear Titia, I'm sure you've had many of us tricked thru' your title.  This is such a delightful and cute treat from you.  Enjoyed!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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