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How Fares the Day?
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How Fares the Day? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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How fares the day in feathered quilt To hide beneath lest you should wilt In coloured dreams left from the night And morning rays in gladdened sight How fares the day now new begun Rise up anew and greet the sun How fares the day when morning sun Signals that the day moves on When shadows call and tasks do too And there are many things to do How fares the day when noon is near To bring about the songs of cheer How fares the day when afternoon Disappears too much, too soon When still the tasks remain undone And race you with the waning sun How fares the day in shadows stall When midday meets the evening's call How fares the day when even song Calls you in, says day is done When shadows fall on idle hands And life is freed from its demands How fares the day when time for rest Becomes at last by shadows blest How fares the day when midnight nears And dark of night will still your tears Where comfort is a bear grown cold In darkness deep alone and old How fares the day when depth of night Is met by wings of angel flight How fares the day when quilted dawn Sheds the dark and dons new morn. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul and hearts eternal light, your writing is without doubt so incredibly amazing, to write the day from dawn to another dawn is so innovative, and original. Your writing is spellbindingly perfect it simply falls on my soul like a whisper of wonder, breathed in awe by an angel. You always manage to cloak my soul in an aura of delight. Your words fall like moonlit shadows that grace the ground with silvered light. This is purely an Ohhhhh of softness stroking my skin with a hint of promises. I love it utterly utterly, YOU never cease to amaze me and always I value your writing. You can tell can’t you, drat I wonder what gives me away It must be my delicate hint of I love this utterly utterly that does it, hmmmmm? As always Mushy    And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
How fares the day..elegantly...now that I've read this  |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Goodness, this is very wonderfully well written and a very vivid portrayal of a very beautiful imagination that you possess. I really love your rhyming scheme, this is one of the best poems I have read in a while. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved heart see that’ll teach me not to check that I’d singed in, anyway darling girl you know she will agree with every single word. This is really fabulous YOU always treat my soul to sheer delight thank you Absolutely first class writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, each day has its ow way and how it fares no one can tell, but one thing for sure is each one has something special! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry, a beautiful write...this is very soothing, a song in quiet liquid motion, a baby's cradle in arms...thank you... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How fares the day when even song Calls you in, says day is done When shadows fall on idle hands And life is freed from its demands How fares the day when time for rest Becomes at last by shadows blest This is absolutely beautiful, Keth... You used some gorgeous imagery. ~ loving hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How fares the day when even song Calls you in, says day is done When shadows fall on idle hands And life is freed from its demands How fares the day when time for rest Becomes at last by shadows blest A beautiful piece, Keth... I love your gorgeous imagery ~ loving hugsLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Keth, If I don't start my day that early...isn't it still a good day? Excellent write girl. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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dwarfdroppings New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 6UK |
Superb writing...flows beautifully. Rgds Dwarfy Only my opinion, if you require a gaurantee............buy a toaster! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Keth...a very pleasant read M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellently crafted my friend. . . you make these seem so easy. . . I'll save this one as a fine example of your craft. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This flows so beautifully with such lovely imagery... I can imagine the effort that went into it reading so effortlessly. *S* It's superb, Kethry... one of your best! |
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