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beaded crystal planes of life
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beaded crystal planes of life |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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rain-streaked window against a gray sky looks almost stucco-like like a wall that you can see through but cannot touch up close, I can see the beads perfect symmetrical worlds of being some standing still, others moving too fast like shooting stars on a crystal plane I wonder if they can travel up why they travel down and, what makes them stay and, I lament when another bead another life comes streaking down that crystal plane and leaves only dryness in its path --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (06-25-2002 04:27 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marvelous imagery, Sven... I saw the break of rainbow therein... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I agree with Sunshine, great imagry. I can almost smell the rain.  Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands this is a pearl to be kept for posterity I loved it (in case you couldn't tell) Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, my friend with the golden pen... You have managed to do it again.. Left me in awe! This is wonderful imagery! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Good thoughts, good write, enjoyed |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
As Always splendid!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sven, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love how you detail lifes cornerstones, your fascination of raindrops shines with time in your words! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi there, Sven Pen. Very nice thoughts you have going here. I think you've moved into another style of writing...or at least another tone..damn..lol..you know what I mean. I'm sure of it. umm..  Long way around to say HEY! I LOBE THIS!!  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you everyone. . . it's just another journey down the path that leads to answers. . . we just have to find out where the questions are. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great imagery, Sven. Life does indeed have many planes. That I know for sure. Good write. All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (06-27-2002 12:26 AM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhhh I enjoyed reading your poem... Splendid writing PoetFriendSven... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very cool write, my friend. Sandra |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Extremely deep and meditative words here....got me thinking. Which is good, I like to think about the little things in the world and how they fit into the big picture. Anyways, I'm rambling....beautiful poetry and imagery. I enjoyed the read.  *Krista Knutson* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all again. . . it's amazing what kind of inspiration you can find if you just look around. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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