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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-25 04:14 PM



Awakening


you wake my darkness

to know such dreams within you

come and taste my hope

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-25 04:17 PM


ilikalot.

Very inviting. Short and strong. My fave.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-06-25 04:18 PM


we two sharing dreams
the knowing of each other
a sampling of taste

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3 posted 2002-06-25 04:29 PM


with eyes wide open. . .

great work helen. . .

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4 posted 2002-06-25 07:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may loves beauty always invite you in and establish hope in you forever! (kiss on cheek) This is magnificet, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-06-27 02:28 AM


Yup,
A good upbeat write. I like it too! Thanks Helen.

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6 posted 2002-06-27 06:11 AM


YES PLEASE~! I love it!

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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