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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-25 08:56 AM


A wind is whistle
through my mind--
I watch the skies
and even crows
fly for cover--
their silence
be an eerie omen,
and yet?
still I welcome
sweet reprieve
of unexpected
Autumn breeze--
knowing it is season
out of place--
aware
it is a portent
of a storm.

I must be shrew
to welcome this.

I must be mad
to dance with Thor.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-25 09:00 AM



Well if you're off to welcome a storm
then I know I am too, because I enjoy
the electric of the moment...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-06-25 09:24 AM


Serenity~
I saw where my rainstorms were headed your way ...

Now ... how cool is this line ?????

'A wind is whistle
through my mind--'


VERY !
*Huggers*
~*Marge*~

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Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-06-25 11:30 AM


A wind is whistle
through my mind--
I watch the skies
and even crows
fly for cover--
their silence
be an eerie omen,
and yet?
still I welcome
sweet reprieve
of unexpected
Autumn breeze--
knowing it is season
out of place--
aware
it is a portent
of a storm.
==========================
Did you just call me an old crow  

its doing the same here....
I unplugged me stereo...LOL
notice the puter is still on  ROFL...
me thinks you could strike the lightening back

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through,
There comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking,
I passed that point long ago.

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2002-07-24 02:15 AM


SweetieSerenity, not much I can say but that well ya know how much me likezzzzzzzz your writing and this one caught my eye2nite so I'm replying here2let you know...
Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

Elizabeth Cor
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Over the river and through the woods
5 posted 2002-07-24 04:03 AM


I must be mad
to dance with Thor.


tsk. not so, lightening princess...
want to send some of that weather up yonder?... ooohh but a great gray tizzy would be lovely 'bout now...

love your lines, lady... (reminds me of the IMviornment rotfl)

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-07-24 04:11 AM


"love your lines, lady... (reminds me of the IMviornment rotfl)"

er...Meg? Should I be insulted? *grin*

although an IMviorment doesn't sound so bad after awhile....

heh heh heh.

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